by Innocent Fairy Oct 31, 2011
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
You walk the shores |
I really really appricaite this comment and it means alot |
Awww I really liked this poem! I loved the title - it caught my eye... I liked the descriptions and your choice of words... the parts about walking on the sand and listening to the ocean's music was breathtaking.. I could imagine this scenario! |
You both did a great job, but then both are very talented. I hope to see more from the two of you . I enjoyed each line, it was smooth and clear. |
by Bobby
I enjoyed doing this it was fun, shooting from the hip shows something about you and your talent is even more revealing. Your parts are the best parts :0) |