I enjoyed doing this it was fun, shooting from the hip shows something about you and your talent is even more revealing. Your parts are the best parts :0)

You both did a great job, but then both are very talented. I hope to see more from the two of you . I enjoyed each line, it was smooth and clear.

Awww I really liked this poem! I loved the title - it caught my eye... I liked the descriptions and your choice of words... the parts about walking on the sand and listening to the ocean's music was breathtaking.. I could imagine this scenario!

Well done - a really nice collaboration! :)

I really really appricaite this comment and it means alot