Walking With An Ocean Of Thoughts

by Bobby   Oct 31, 2011


You walk the shores
leaving footsteps in the sand
walking along
with no master plan

Thee ocean wipes clean
all the feelings between
and sets you free
within peace and serenity

As you walk along
and stroll across the sand
you listen to the waves
nature's music nature's band

You clear your mind,
let you're self go,
soar through the wind,
listening to you're heart,
deciding what's right
and let you're troubles fade

As you just stop to feel
Across the sky you glance
Wondering if your ready
To maybe take a chance
It has hurt before each time
You think about what is to gain
Fear slips into the walk
As you remember previous pain

The memories come like a flood
but you begin to wonder
can this time be different
can this time be real
should I take the leap of faith
take a risk, for either way
everything will change

For the heart is a vessel
that one has to be careful with
Though it will hold much
and is extremely strong
It is made special
It is made to be cherished
It wasn't made to be treated wrong

You wonder if to not say something
Is the same as not being true?
Not telling are you really being real?
But if they really care for you
And who you think they are
Yet you wonder once it is said
will they be distant like a star

~Poets notes
This is a collab done with a beautiful, amazing and very gifted girl that goes by the handle of Innocent Fairy. I hope we get more chances to do many more. Thanks and please comment and rate on hers as well :o)

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  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww I really liked this poem! I loved the title - it caught my eye... I liked the descriptions and your choice of words... the parts about walking on the sand and listening to the ocean's music was breathtaking.. I could imagine this scenario!

    Well done - a really nice collaboration! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A very good collab, it flowed smoothly, and was done with clarity of wording. Excellent hope to read more from the two of you..

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Aw you make me blush :") I had muches of fun writing this with you and we make a good team cuz I think together it's amazing :D and I can't wait for more,,,hehe :) maybe we'll become famous together :) we did a great job and don't forget you were great as well and never doubt :) if I could vote it would be 5/5 which together makes 10/10 :D