Aw you make me blush :") I had muches of fun writing this with you and we make a good team cuz I think together it's amazing :D and I can't wait for more,,,hehe :) maybe we'll become famous together :) we did a great job and don't forget you were great as well and never doubt :) if I could vote it would be 5/5 which together makes 10/10 :D

A very good collab, it flowed smoothly, and was done with clarity of wording. Excellent hope to read more from the two of you..

Awww I really liked this poem! I loved the title - it caught my eye... I liked the descriptions and your choice of words... the parts about walking on the sand and listening to the ocean's music was breathtaking.. I could imagine this scenario!

Well done - a really nice collaboration! :)