Realy, u r so romantic..ur poems sound like a songs..one wud like to sing entire life..

This is so pretty and full of color I dont know where to start saying how very very good it is.

I could picture and feel the feelings within in the words

This is one of your very best works I think, and as above me said it could be converted into a great song :0)

Keep walking with God and you will always get it right :0)

5/5

This is romantic, and touching. The reader can feel each word, each emotion. Well written, with great flow, awesome wording

You are very quickly becoming one of my favorite authors. You are very consistant in the quality of emotion in your work. I love this poem. I can relate to it.

You are very quickly becoming one of my favorite authors. You are very consistant in the quality of emotion in your work. I love this poem. I can relate to it.

How could I be so blind
that you're an amazing guy
who came without a sight
please let me get this right

This is my favorite stanza.

It does sound like a song. i like it.