This was very emotional and I foudn it to be a compelling read

5/5

This piece is nicely penned. It really makes the audience think about themselves in a position like this. I think you have done wonderfully, and that is a remarkable thing. Emotion over flows in this piece, the tone is more than sad, and the voice of the girl who wrote this is so clear, I can hear her reading it to me. I can hear every tear she fights back, every waver in her voice, every memory she has lived comming back to her as she thinks that her death will fix everything. But what she fails to see is that her death will only make things worse for her and her family. This piece is heartrending, you are very talented. Excellent job on this.