Wow i can litteraly see this! :)

I can feel this 5/5

Yet another beautiful and dark piece from your side.

My dread grows as doom's scythe falls against my heart.

^ This is just idk.. .awesome. The image this context creates and the reference of the doom's scythe falling against the authors heart is splendid.

Very well written.

Okay, now I'm enjoying dark poems even more. This piece is splendid. You and other poets like "vi vire..." just surprised me with your dark poetry. And sometimes I can't comment because the pieces jut leave me speechless. Good job.

5/5