To those who see with loving eyes,
Life is beautiful.

To those who speak with tender voices,
Life is peaceful.

To those who help with gentle hands,
Life is full

and to those who care
with a compassionate heart

Life is good beyond all measure

Hi. I broke your poem up a little differently but didnt change a word. If you break it up a bit it tends to read better. Hope this helps, but a poem filled with wisdom. Well done.