by Meme Nov 1, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Pouring salt on |
by RSJ
It doesn't get darker than this now, does it? |
Wow I love this poem! It was dark, deep, yet so intriguing. I felt the pain, especially of the open wound... and it was an amazing piece. Well-written and powerful my friend!! =) |
Short and powerfull |
Really good work. You fit alot of painful emotion in a very small space. I dont think the title matches very well though. |
Short but dynamic. A well penned write. Keep it up I really enjoy your work |