by Jenni
I have to admit that this poem is a bit long, but it didn't keep me from reading because one I started you had me captivated, your words kept pulling me in more and more and I wanted to know how the story developes. You managed to portray a vivid image because your words are really descriptive. |
This peice is amazing. You are very talented. The story pulled me right in and captivated me. Very descriptive your words took me to that place. This is going on my favorites. I would put authors note before your statement at the end just to seperate it from the poem. It took me a minute to realize that it wasnt part of your work. |