Wonderfull love story!
you both told it really well!

i found myself getting sucked in as i was reading. haha
do more!

5/5 from me

I loved working with you! I love your ideas and how you were able to put it all together into a wonderful piece!! Good job my friend!!!!

More to come! :)

Omg guys i effing love this <3

so nominating :)

I could visualize this whole thing playing out in my head. Seeing the sweaty hands, the blushing & how the 2 connect when he makes the move.

the cutest poem I've ever read

100/100(:

Amaaazing collab guys. Loved it so much.
Your ideas just meshed together so well.

Good job :)

I love a good love story and i loved this one. I could picture everything in my mind which means it was written very well. Everything about this poem was perfect from the both of you. Really nice job.

Wow wow wow amazing beautiful fantastic wonderful delightful wow just amazing is all I can say :) 5/5 great job u two

The best callab ive ever seen the idea was beautiful. .. A common idea but ive never seen it written so well its a love story that everyone would love to happen. . And the fact you each wrote it from his and her point of you. .. Made this somthing special. .. This is my field. .. The love poems that make you melt its not very often i see somthin that gets to me but i cant deny the amazing words and pure power and emotion used here. .. Deffo a fav and if i can a nomination. .. Simply astonishing. .. Amazingly penned

tony

Sarah & Matthew :)

You shall write more often, for there are amazing exquisite emotions poured, alongside the scenes which created a very smooth atmosphere which was supported by the storyboard of the poem.

Brilliant ;)

I really have to agree with what everyone has said. the only thing I can add is I really enjoyed reading this masterpiece

Connie

Love it! I can completely put myself in scene. So can relate. Aweome Job!