Comments : Falling

  • 13 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    This was an awesome poem. Really loved the expression used here of falling. Very nice work. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Sweet poem, short but full of deep emotions and heart felt expressions.

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Woooww!! I love this poem! It was so sweet and enchanting... the first stanza was beautiful and really captivated me! I loved the whole idea about it - I love that you described love as floating, rather than floating. I loved your choice of words. Great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was very pretty...the 1st stanza was my fav. i loved the way it just flowed off the tongue. Gr8 job :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Kuro

    This was simply lovely. a feeling that is so hard to describe, and yet i somehow know exactly what you are talking about. well done. loved it

    ~kuro