Though the title is simple, it made me curious because I was wondering what you might be refering to or asking so I decided to read your poem. I think that the rhymes were good and even if this poem is short, the message and meaning behind this is quite powerful. The questions at the end are thought-provoking.

Well written poem.

What? I like the title, it caught my attention and the questions at the end as well. I'm glad I still live because I have a long way to go and your poem only reassured that to me.

Well written and I like the flow. It sounds smooth.

A clever little piece and really well written.
Take care and all the best,
Ben