Comments : Cut The Slience

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    & You say you're not good? Girl you're amazing :)

    Its crazy how much I relate to this poem.

    Weren't you my best friend?
    Weren't we so close before all of this happened?
    I thought you said nothing could ever,
    Break us apart.
    You said we could make it through anything,
    You Said We'd Last,
    Though now as I look back,
    I now realize that everything you told me,
    Everything you Promised me,
    Turned out to be nothing more,
    Than a lie.
    -I know this feeling, realizing that every promise said, every word spoken was nothing but some big lie. When at the time you thought it would be forever, not never.

    You can tell this is written from your heart. That it pains you inside to be out of eachothers lives, that he can easily pretend you don't exist.

    But remember girl. Guys rarely show their true feelings, they have this ego thing especially infront of there friends.
    Want his attention?Let him think it doesn't bother you, don't call, text or anything. Act happy :)

    I loved this poem
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Em

    I can really relate to this poem, and I understand your pain. I actually feel the same way for a person right now. I'll give it a 5/5 because of the amazing way you put your emotions in this poem.
    Though I would have liked it to end a bit different :)