Hmmm der r eclipsces in lyf, d solar or lunar eclipsce lasts for a few minutes to a hour, but sumtymz sum1 z alwys der 4 u no matter u hate or lyk d person, rainin ur lyf wid luv, care, messages, most of d tym ignord or neglectd..

N one fyn day u wake up n find no response frm d person, one day goes thinkin, 2nd day 2.. Pain starts, n as days go frustration builds up... We neva recognize or understand d importance of sumthing or sumthing wen its close 2 us..

We only understand wen its lost...:) same wid oders, same wid us also...:)

Alwysz lyf z lyk wat we say evrythings wid us, we r not satisfied n keep runnin here n der in search of happiness.. N in d end wen its lost we realize it was alwys der.. O my God, only if I cud c n realize...:)

Luvly luvly n meaningful poem...:) keep it up

Who am I in your life ? Someone
you miss? Or someone who misses
you? You will find the answer if
you looked deep inside, it's simple,
but yet so hard because its a truth.

one thing that hurts inside is to miss someone even knowing that they doesn't care. it really hurts. the above stanza is my favorite. i love your writing style because they are all so simple flowing and easy to understand. with deep emotions.. good work .

and this stanza:

Tomorrow you will miss me, but
will I miss you after that too ?!
I cant promise you anything, but
my words can tell you what I failed
to do.

it really relates to me... so true and full of emotions.. its great... good work.

From Alone

I feel this way too<3

Tomorrow you will miss me, but
will I miss you after that too ?!
I cant promise you anything, but
my words can tell you what I failed
to do.
-Love this, saying that even if you failed at it your words will always show what you meant to do.

Love this poem :) wanting to not become someone in his past, but someone he misses more then anything

Amazing Job
5/5

So sweet good one i like it :)

Awesome aweosme awesome

I m speechless.. i serioulsy am...

This poem really got me thinking. I loved the questions you posed. You really give the reader something to think about long after reading the poem. The only downside for me was the title. I felt you could have picked something better. Something with an edge to it.

Still great poem

5/5

Loved it 5/5