by Jenni
My first thought in the morning the last at night |
by Chevalier des Fleurs
Yes I agree breaking it into parts can help extend the flow of the poem and help the reader focus easier but it is very good in the way you express yourself. The flow is so so but I usually look for a strong message behind a poem rather than flow. Good job, love for you to check some of mine out and comment. Thank you keep writing. |