Well, I can see the sadness throughout this piece. Just remembering what you once had and knowing you dont have it anymore. Alot of people can relate to this.

Ok, now for some suggestions:

That are we through
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i think its better like this "That we are through"

Do you still think about me
Do you still hold my teddy bear
Do you still love me
Do you still wish I was there
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i suggest a question mark at the end of each sentance.

What happened to the happy couple
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again a question mark here.

What happened to the love
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and another question mark here

Hmm, other than that. Its perfect :)

Wow amazing always but sad,,kinda of relate,,a wonderful write greatly penned thee emotion and u picture with imagination as u read,,,I loved the poem everything was fantastic 5/5

I agree with girl coment. .. You write like me so much emotion and deep feeling. .. Most lads are scared of showin this side but like me. .. You cant help it. .. Well penned. .. Now in my favs poets

Aww this poem was sad but so relatable.. I think we've all thought of similar questions at some point, and wonder how others see us, and if they still think of us from time to time. I felt really sad as I read this... and I really felt every emotion you expressed.

Well done my friend!! =)