Night Shades

by Cinnamonspice   Nov 3, 2011


An aura, the color of honey
glimmers behind tempest clouds
as the sun sinks slowly from view.

The whisper of raven's wings
dispel the invisible air of shadows
as he hunts for his midnight rest.

Day has been relinquished to
the creatures of starless nights,
silent watchers of dreams.

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  • 12 years ago

    by tainted melody

    Very poetic desrciption, and very original...gr8 write :) i'd love it if you could check out some of my stuff and let me know what u think

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem was beautiful! I loved the imagery in this piece from start to end. It was a little short though that is the only downside for me.

    Still good write

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    I really like how this poem is so rooted in great imagery in the first stanzas; with the setting sun and the raven looking for his "midnight rest". You really close it nicely with the "...silent watchers of dreams." wonderful. you always impress

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Short and heavy...connie....fp

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Day has been relinquished to
    the creatures of starless nights,
    silent watchers of dreams.

    such amazing words, loved it 5/5

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