Nice images of sunset and what takes place afterward. Good job.

A very serene and quiet picturization of dusk setting in with night to follow, and a raven looking for his "night's rest" and "creatures of starless nights" but why raven? why starless? do they depict dark dreams? If so, I do understand. Beautifully dark and mysterious, perhaps to the reader.

I cannot pick a favorite. As I always say, your compositions are short and heavy. Such vividtiy, to be found within few words is scarce. Very well written. Stellar!

Great job, it is amazingly descriptive and can be appriciated more since you have written it so well that it is painted in my minds eye!!!

I loved this the image you set was amazing and the tittle drew me stright in penned to perfection connie x

Great job Connie vivid and perfect images.
Awesome girl

A serene image that speaks volumes, those words were so simply put but you did amazing with this.
Brilliant Girl
Love
Tara
xxxx

I really like the wording and imagery that you use in this poem. Yes it is short but not all great poems got to be super long. This captures the readers attention and really gives a sense and vibe of the beauty you describe. Good job!

Connie! You created such intense, dark imagery that left me in awe! I love your choice of words, and I think everything was well-written.

I loved your metaphors!!

Great job hon!

I like the imagery you have painted here in this nature poem..it brings the night alive! Liked the read..excellent!

Connie, you painted a perfect picture of sunset, and not only do i find serenity, but also wildness because the contrast between ravens and this honey color over the horizon reflects that.

Well done, amazing write, full of colors.

Like the sunset, sunrise, nature in general, your poems are beautiful, this poem is definitely one of the beautiful ones Im talkin about. It always amazes me, how do you do it? Create wonderful imagery with such short poems. I guess theres just one word for it, talent.

Day has been relinquished to
the creatures of starless nights,
silent watchers of dreams.

such amazing words, loved it 5/5

Short and heavy...connie....fp

I really like how this poem is so rooted in great imagery in the first stanzas; with the setting sun and the raven looking for his "midnight rest". You really close it nicely with the "...silent watchers of dreams." wonderful. you always impress

This poem was beautiful! I loved the imagery in this piece from start to end. It was a little short though that is the only downside for me.

Still good write

5/5

Very poetic desrciption, and very original...gr8 write :) i'd love it if you could check out some of my stuff and let me know what u think