How sad this poem has went this long with no comment...what a message inside. And your rhymes were subtle and right on :) It flowed along nicely Randy. Good job
Lostlove

Nice poem :)

I have to say, the most passionate poets are often those with a strong spiritual appetite. When I've felt truly in love, and it has only ever happened once, I just knew there had to be a God, because no other feeling as pure as love could originate with anything else. I have learned a lot about the depth of love you have for this one person in your life, and to know that she encourages you to pray to God, well I can see why you love her.

Keep it up

I love this one, definitely puts in perspective why we are really here, and gives feelings of peace towards why we have to follow rules that can sometimes be difficult to follow.