Dark Clouds

by Ashunti   Nov 4, 2011


........Dark Clouds
When will you brighten
I always feel frightened
........When your around
My heart turns to cold stone
I'm chilled to the bone
........Betrayal
I wont reach the level of denial
I wont let my dead body hit the tile
........Pain
So gone head, that's right your to blame
For all this hurt, anger, darkness, PAIN
........Horror
So torture me until they lower
My cold dead body into the ground slower and slower
.........Cower
Let the creatures of the under earth devour
My decaying body turning sour!
........Dare
Don't care
I'll come back to scare you back to your senses
........Power
Its time to overpower
It's time to cower
........Life
It's time to live with the afterlife
Weird how all it took was a small knife
To end.........
My LIFE!

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jeremy S Farley

    I really like the pace and flow of this one. All in all a pretty cool peice. The only thing that I would criticize,is the line "So gone head, thats right your to blame." It made me stumble over its meaning and kind of broke the rythym.