Comments : Every thing is wrong

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Aw girl.
    i love this.

    I can see this happening, you reaching out needing him to be there. i can see the tears streaming down your face as you call out longing to be in his arms.

    Wishing you could help other people, but it being all to much for you to handle.

    Amazing job
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Flow is amazing..emotions wel expressed..that things r nt going gud at ur surroundings a u r sad..
    U need strength that can build ur hopes inside ..strength which u find or see in his arms only ,u want to cry in his arms to let him knw what u r going through,bt evn he is far..
    Ful points..

  • 13 years ago

    by Bobby

    This is simply beautiful and has brought tears upon reading along with the poem above this one

    I think I am speechless and need a few moments to reflect reading such a beautiful worl of art and emotion of words
    5/5