by Alexandra Jozelia Nov 5, 2011
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
When it was only us |
But, Thanks Allot :3 |
Thanks Allot for the Advice and I really appreciate the fact that you liked the poem .. The poem is old-ish even though I'm quite new in poetry but i already tried once earlier this year and that was one of my "experiences" with it.. |
by L
Holy! |
Thank You very much for the comment and advice <3 |
by yogi73
A nice sweet poem. I might consider using "another" as opposed to "other" but that is just my opinion. otherwise good flow and structure to your poem. |