Short but simple :)

Love this :)
comparing worn shoes to standing firmly on your feet.

Great Job<3
5/5

A333... I adore your worn shoes :D

I just saw Nano's comments on your latest two.. they were like: I'm happy you became a brightened woman.. writing about bright subjects.. :D

And now.. DIJJJ BOOM ZIG ZAG!!!

Saddddd..
I swear I love sad poems.. more.. more..

I'm too wrapped onto my corner
to take a step outside this chamber,
too poor to wish for divinity to grant
me a plate of gold, and a dream
of silver under my filthy covers.

^Awesome awesome imagery, I liked the flow here, it was serene yet sad, beautiful yet heartbreaking, I like the imagery of filthy covers, so original

But dear, though I wear worn shoes,
I still have good feet,
still believe in firm stands.

^I loved it all, seriously. But the ending, the ending was absolutely perfect, you are so original, and so true I love it

Love
Tara
xxxx

Hey there, how about stop being sad, ha? you already showered us with the amazingness of your sad poems, we now long for something cheerful, for I am such a depressed adorable thing, can't you see my frown on my cheeks?

'I'm too wrapped onto my corner
to take a step outside this chamber'

^

Non, non, ma demoiselle. You will widen up your arms and just fly out of that room. I assure you. ;) Allah ye3eno 3alaiki shu 2awie, lol.

Wonderful write, nevertheless.

Awww I love this! I loved the concept of this poem, and the underlying meaning of it... it was very unique and interesting, with an eye-catching title. The ending was uplifting - I love the idea of standing firmly on those worn shoes!!

I loved this part:

too poor to wish for divinity to grant
me a plate of gold, and a dream
of silver under my filthy covers.

Amazing!!! 5/5