Comments : Meredith

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Powerful, full of hurt but a little conflicting,

    You go from this

    You used to be there for me,
    And comfort me in sorrow,
    You used to spend all night with me,
    Dreaming of tomorrow.

    To this

    Then one day you were selfish,
    And did not seem to care,
    You forget about all the times,
    The moments I was there.

    to me it seems this person was not selfish but had enough of always being there.

    (I am only commenting on the context of poetry not a comment on what may or may not happend between two friends.)

    I would look at inserting another stanza between these two to emphasize how much you had done for her...
    regards

    Darren

    • 12 years ago

      by Rey Severs

      Meredith and I were friends for almost 4 years.Then one day,she changed everything about herself that I loved.She would constantly whine about how bad her life was,when really,she had it all and never appreciated it,it would never be good enough.I tried being for her those 3 years,and I always answered her calls,no matter what time of night or day.Then she said something hurtful to me,something that should never be said,those words that could wreck a friendship,the ones you never "go there with'.I asked her how could she say that to one of her closest friends.Her response was to publicly post "You were never a true friend,grow up for once in your life".I am not playing innocent but all I did was care about her,and be there for her when she needed me.Pulicly humiliating me,then calling me childish when I asked her why she did that,I decided I no longer wished to be a friend to someone who did not appreciate me.3 months later she accused me of hacking her accounts,and texted me telling me all the things she told me others said about me,but saying it was her all along.So,I wrote this poem,because,I was upset that my closest friend no longer cared about me,she was too busy trying to please everyone else.