Holly if you knew how good you are at writing heart-breaking poetry, you can touch anyones heart I'm sure, amazing as usual 5/5

Totally love this! perfect flow throughout out the whole poem..every stanza full with amazing touching details..wanting him to stay..I relate to this so much:(..AMAZING! DUH!:))
10000/10000

This, was very descriptive and heart breaking. One can picture himself/herself in the scenario. Relate throughly. The flow is flawless. Splendid job.

Wow girl so much hurt pain love longing hating just so much emotion in this wonderful poem u have written so well and greatly I felt it all and so much stronger cuz I relate maybe now but from my past as well but I have learned nothing can be the same and I must move on though it hurts inside,,,we are here for each other always as we look to the sun for hope an think with beauty all around,,,things will one day be better,,,I love all ur amazing poems always 5/5
Ur a great poet indeed even if not wanting or meaning to be,,,loves always

You have been through a lot and poems like this come easy to you a lot of the time...we all see that you have a gift for writing just keep up at it..this one in particular was really really good..had my eyes watering a little bit (shhh) great one girl

I can say this poem is the saddest poem that i read today... full of emotions. great work. it made me bit sad.. because this poem is such a sad and relates to lost love. good work

This is why i love you girly this explains what i did.... sometimes saying goodbye is impossible