Simply Love (Collab with TJ BECKER Arizona Eagle)

by Jenni   Nov 6, 2011


Right now I need one of those writes,
that tell about the in between.
Not about the beautiful delights
or the absolutely awful end.

Days that flow into nights without tremors
or explosions of excitement
simplistic moments in time that
fill a the void of nothingness.

Casual conversations on the phone
that are of no importance complete
a days wake, a soft good night as
we retreat into the realm of dreams.

One doesn't dream alone about
being together, but rather together
about keeping what is there to
eventually wake up caressing.

Why doesn't anybody write about
the specialty of everyday life,
we shouldn't have to go without
because they're spent with our love.

This is a collab with the great poet TJ BECKER Arizona Eagle. I'd appreciate it if you could add the comments to his profile too, thanks. :)
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1180303

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  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Definitely make quite the team which is shown beautifully in this poem. You both have quite a superb talent and writing style.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 13 years ago

    by Liliana

    I think you guys should do more collabs, you seem to work perfectly as a team and this poem is the prove.

    Right now I need one of those writes,
    that tell about the in between.
    Not about the beautiful delights
    or the absolutely awful end.

    My personal favorite^^

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww this is a beautifully written poem! It was a joy to read - and I loved the topic... yes you both are right that there aren't poems about such things. This was a really nice collaboration, you two should collaborate more! Well done =D

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    Right now I need one of those writes,
    that tell about the in between.
    Not about the beautiful delights
    or the absolutely awful end.

    Days that flow into nights without tremors
    or explosions of excitement
    simplistic moments in time that
    fill a the void of nothingness.

    I LOVE the first two stanzas

    Oh these beautiful days we seldom have the privilege of experiencing.

    I really enjoyed this poem. I felt at peace as I was reading it, as the words came through me I felt a sense of calm. As if you were telling me to slow down in life and take a look around and not worry so much (and there's a lot to worry about)

    A beautiful well written poem

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Another good poem, certainly deserving of all the praise.

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