Thank you Jenni for the pleasure of writing with my talented friend.
I think it came out really good , your idea was very creative and realistic. I enjoyed this very much again thank you.

I enjoyed reading it:) its lovely and sweet:) well written, great job:) 5/5 from me:)

One doesn't dream alone about
being together, but rather together
about keeping what is there to
eventually wake up caressing.

Why doesn't anybody write about
the specialty of everyday life,
we shouldn't have to go without
because they're spent with our love.

The title is so justified with these stanzas, so simple yet trench deep. I am never left unimpressed. An awesome collaboration

Idk what I really think of this poem but I really loved it and worded greatly and fantastically written,,,an amazing job u two very greatly done a magnificient read,,,very descriptive and interesting it is a good point,,,wonderful :) 5/5

This was and excellent collab because all the stanza fitted so well together you couldn't tell it was writen by two different authors.

Excellently put

5/5

I loved it, you two did a great job of making the in between moments of love simple and wonderful

Connie

Your both very diffrent poets / poetess but you fit together so smoothly i though this was an awesome callab it worked out very well well penned 5/5

tony

Another good poem, certainly deserving of all the praise.

Right now I need one of those writes,
that tell about the in between.
Not about the beautiful delights
or the absolutely awful end.

Days that flow into nights without tremors
or explosions of excitement
simplistic moments in time that
fill a the void of nothingness.

I LOVE the first two stanzas

Oh these beautiful days we seldom have the privilege of experiencing.

I really enjoyed this poem. I felt at peace as I was reading it, as the words came through me I felt a sense of calm. As if you were telling me to slow down in life and take a look around and not worry so much (and there's a lot to worry about)

A beautiful well written poem

x

Awww this is a beautifully written poem! It was a joy to read - and I loved the topic... yes you both are right that there aren't poems about such things. This was a really nice collaboration, you two should collaborate more! Well done =D

I think you guys should do more collabs, you seem to work perfectly as a team and this poem is the prove.

Right now I need one of those writes,
that tell about the in between.
Not about the beautiful delights
or the absolutely awful end.

My personal favorite^^

Definitely make quite the team which is shown beautifully in this poem. You both have quite a superb talent and writing style.

5/5

-Heather