Comments : The sun has pierced the clouds

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is beautiful and yet sad all rolled together with a little bit of hope. It reminded me of a loved one having a terminal illness, knwoing they will be gone soon and trying to help us deal with it, only in our minds we ignore it and want to focus on the itme we have left with them.

    You have a wrote a very unique poem which feels like it just came from the heart without too much effort and just flowed onto the page as it came into your head.

    I enjoyed this read nd related tot he situation which I picked up on.

    Well done

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Plz karla, dnt write such beautiful poems.

    Hold my hand, my love
    my faith is not dry yet..

    not dry yet..thanks.