Comments : Love Me or Release Me

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    First of all excellent title. I can see you picked it with care. It really draws the reader to the poem.

    "Let me fall
    let me bleed
    let me believe the lie,
    but never bring to me
    your words of goodbye."

    ^ You start was my favorite part of the poem.

    As for the rest of the poem I really enjoyed the read

    5/5