Comments : Sea's without a ship

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    I loved whole poem, telling him that hw much he means to u and at d same time hw much u faith u hv in him..
    Ready to hlp him at his bad and at othr hand ,hv trust in ur heart,dt if u fal ,he wil catch u..
    U hv used evrything frm sea to nature to let him knw ur attachmnt wid him..

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This was excellent. It was so sweet and you picked out a really good title for this piece.

    Great read!

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Thank u muches :)

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    The title took my attention.
    Sea's without ship. You cannot sail that sea without your ship the one that helps you get to your destination with calm or trouble waters, it doesn't matter that ship is strong enough to help you cross that difficult road.

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    I love you;
    friends forever,
    so you must know
    I cannot
    sail the sea's without you.

    beautiful and so so much what a close friendship means to me

    Not sure how you get in mine and others heads and write our thoughts sometimes but you do have that gift in your writings

    top score and your one of my top friends too :0) hugs