Mysterious.

I love the compassion going on here because to me the second stanza just came of as so cozy while the first was kinda of ominous- and still they just cam together nicely 5/5

Mystery is truth under cover. Truth is eye that sees through deceit. Good try.

I really thankful for sharing this such beautiful poem..your so inspiring, I like the way you write your poem, you have your own style to catch the reader's mind to convey this purely amazing piece from you...I really really impress from your stuff, longing to read more from you:)
Keep writing fabulous poems...

Aww such a beautiful, warm write... that made me feel all tingly inside to read! :D So cute, yet breathtaking and lovely.

Have missed reading yours while I've been away.... Excellent my friend :D

A very original and imaginative piece that comes to life with your poetic words. I love how you open the poem up in a dream, as it seems. Your emotions pour into this poem, wishing for a chance to stay in this embrace and to treasure the friendship and perhaps just the company of this person.

"yet nestle in warmth of your friendship
pressed against my skin for a moment in time,
while overlooking city lights of amber,
sparking mystery beneath our feet. "
^^^
This had to be my favorite part of your poem and as a finisher, it was nothing short of amazing. The imagery is simply incredible giving me clear images to see. I really like how you wrote in "city lights of amber" as it was just a wonderful image to place in their.

In all, I am glad to see your striving as always to get better and better. This poem once again shows your maturity of life and also your maturity as a writer. I wish you the best in life as you meet new people every day and for that one special person you will meet one day. Great job and keep writing!