Comments : Treasure The Dream

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I like this stanza best:
    Treasure yourself most of all
    You are the dreamer
    Any dream is never small

    -but the entire poem is fantastic and amazing wonderfully worded and greatly worded
    I really loved it well I love all your poems but you never fail to make them great 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nicely done. You have a flowing and meaningful talent. It's easy and smooth

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was incredibly inspiring to me. I loved the simple and beautifully flowing format and how you repeated that one line that kept adding life lessons "treasure the dream" and "treasure the goal".

    A strength-building poem/ I loved how you reminded the world, and personally the reader, that we are dreamers who can fulfill that dream, and that we need to hold onto it and cherish ourselves and what we have faith in.
    Great read, thanks for sharing.
    MaryAnne