Comments : Lie after Lie

  • 13 years ago

    by Bobby

    Reading this brings out a lot of pain
    I hate being lied too
    As I think I am worth the truth

    I feel the pain and anger in the spaces
    I feel the hurt within

    This could be one of your finest poems
    I have read and immediately felt the connection in my own feelings, life and thoughts

    hugs and cares

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Excellent poem lies to some come so easy, and even though said in innocence are hurtful. Some to boast egos make that person feel like they are more meaningful than they are.
    some to avoid problems when in reality come back to bite them in the b**t. I fall in that category I"m afraid
    Anyway excellent piece

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Hmmm. i understand and respect the concept you have put here... your poems makes me feel near possible to a real life... good imagination for me and nice work... sad piece