A fantastic piece but full of sad and painful images. You never fail to amaze us with your words. Sometimes we just feel numb inside and unable to feel anything- like we are dying from the inside-when to feel anything would be welcomed, even pain, to know we are still alive.
Always a treat to read you! :)
Love,
~Lostlove~

I adored this piece! Straight away I connected to the feeling of numbness, when you feel nothing at all and it starts to worry you that you do not feel. you begin to wish to feel anything good or bad, just anything other than nothing! Great opening.

Your line, pain in me is permanent, makes me want to get to know you more and find out what has happened to make you hurt so much, to carry all of these scars which you feel will never fade or heal.

This is very deep emotionally, but very well penned and I relate to this. I liked the way you questioned the reader with your last stanza in the brackets... (my truth.
What is your truth?) this is very clever and ofcourse sends the reader into deep concentration of after thoughts on the poem.

Nice work, really enjoyed this one.