Unforgiven

Everybody can relate to this.
Messing up in a relationship, not seeing what truly was there until its to late.

This flows perfectly, is full of hurt & regret
Great Job(:
5/5

You penned a very logical poem. Half of the worlds problems are lack of communication, Lack of understanding.
As you have written so intelligently, we should never hold back what we feel, being straight forward is the key
Excellent write

Hey,

What a well writen poem

I spoke the words I did not want to say
And as a consequence pushed you away
^^^
The first stanza says so much. Very powerfull words that in a nut shell, tell you the story without even finishing the poem (Though of course I kept reading)

But I was closed, I was entombed
With myself I was consumed
^^^
these words got to me as I know so many people would be going through something like this as well and it is heartbreaking.

Poems like this make me look at my own relationships. I always think to myself "Did you tell your husband that you loved him today"

I loved this poem

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It's sad, many can relate to it. We always hurt someone and sometimes is better to sperate and leave it to time and distance to heal the wounds.
And hopefully it will turn out for the better.

Wid dis poem of uor i can relate my past..coz i did d same wid my ex..
She hurt me to the core,dt I had to spoke rudely wid her and then brkup.
But stil we see each othr at places,we used to visit together..