Your words are powerful and provoke powerful imagery. It is'nt very structured and could use revision. Sometimes it feels as if you will lose the spontaniaty if you pour over your work but remember you are telling a story.

Your words are powerful and provoke powerful imagery. It is'nt very structured and could use revision. Sometimes it feels as if you will lose the spontaniaty if you pour over your work but remember you are telling a story.

Your words are powerful and provoke powerful imagery. It is'nt very structured and could use revision. Sometimes it feels as if you will lose the spontaniaty if you pour over your work but remember you are telling a story.