The best thing in here is the atmosphere you have created.. so gloomy and I can picture all the question marks looming above your head!

Great job with that. You made your piece alive..

:)

Way to go Kristian.

This is deeply moving! the whole tone to the poem is dark and harsh. You connect with the reader instantly. Such sorrow and pain you speak of yet you can see the character in the poem is a fighter wanting to figure things out and find herself.

5/5

Such a sad poem. here i have few suggetions for you..

make the stanza shapess. so it will better look like and would be more easy to read and understand the depth of emotions. first character of every line should be capital.

and

"I feel plain,
lost inside"

are you sure you had to write plain instead of pain. check it..

toher than this poem have so many emotions deep true lost love.. i realy enjoyed reading your poem...