Consuming cloud

by Innocent Fairy   Nov 8, 2011


You're always on my mind,
I miss you a lot
and I worry about you
all the time

I seem to like you like crazy
for the butterflies still linger inside
and I wish this never happened
it's consumed you completely

I wish to be with you,
to hold each other
within a warm embrace
I wish to comfort you
when troubled and blue

I want to gently kiss you
be you're sunshine
to take away you're gray skies
I wish this cloud
was not over you're head

I do not like that you are far
I wish to take a week
fly off to you're place
to spend the days
doing what you think
and maybe
a walk on the beach

I do not wish to see you cry
I do not like that you are sad
I want you to be happy
and have the troubles melt away

You're always on my mind,
I miss you a lot
and I worry about you
all the time

I seem to like you like crazy
for the butterflies still linger inside
and I wish this never happened
it's consumed you completely

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  • 13 years ago

    by L

    Interesting piece. I'll start by saying that there were parts that didn't flow well but that didn't matter because your emotions were clearer than water.

  • 13 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Very caring thoughts for a friend? I presume. Without the care and love from our friends, the soul sometimes dies, though the heart may be alive and beating.

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Realy really so so so lucky he is to have u..

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A love of this magnitude is beyond what most of us ever feel or expect to find. You penned a touching wonderful poem that filled the heart of your friend so completely it will forever stay strong and vivid
    He or she is very lucky indeed

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem is so touching and your friend is lucky to have you. You really spilled your feelings out here and you can tell you love your friend dearly. I love how you took all the elements of friendship and love and poured them into a poem

    5/5

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