I like how you incorporated the title in the poem or how you use eternal dance for the title.

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I think I've locked you,
in this eternal dance

Round,
and round, and round
Halting dizzy
I fell amidst your neurotic mind,
with no sense of memory
just like that

...Lost?! 

Non stop just dancing in circles, until dizzy. Ah, lost?!  Yeah, fell in love just like that no reason no explanation. It just happens.

Nice.

Zahra.. you really penned a sincere piece with lots of flawless imagery to deliver, in a musical way.

And the questions.. brilliant method in approaching the reader.

Amazing:) I love it:) ur going to my Fav list:) a 5/5 from me:)

Amazing:) I love it:) ur going to my Fav list:) a 5/5 from me:)

What you have done is totally creative. Wording was no place near cliche' but brilliant and imaginative. Great write , enjoyable read

Wow! this is really an intoxicating dance it seems. One can feel how the intensity of the feelings of the dance consumes one. It's so real, one can imagine the tune of the vibes radiating between the lovers using beautiful affections. Lovely use of words to convey love in the air, in a creative way. Nicely penned, your an awesome writer. Stay blessed, Cheers!