I thought this was a really interesting poem. It didn't only flow smoothly, but even rhymed well. The message you convey is obvious and I agree to it, I just wonder whether you maybe put the poem in the wrong category, but I am not sure about that either so I would just keep it here unless someone else notices and maybe has a better idea where to place it.

..really, i think the 3rd word in your 3rd line, was stretching at "too", than the reverse.., but, your craft, simply remains true and encouraging. Much enjoyed the read.