Comments : Inside your heart

  • 13 years ago

    by Marvellous

    The flow behind this, is incredible. Thank you for sharing.

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Your writing style reminded me of my initial writings :)

    Keep writing.

    all the best and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is good. You write wonderfully. i loved how you just want to be deep inside his heart though its dark like you are willing to take a risk. Good job and keep up the good work