I think this is a very well written poem and I'll tell you why. Your rhymes fit well and they've not been used too often before, the flow might not always be that smooth, but it mostly is. I really enjoyed how you worded this because the feelings you convey are simply captivating. There isn't really anything I would fault, I'd only recommend you to remove those weird characters and exchange them with the apostroph you meant to put.

Thanks. Yeah the symbols showed up w/ spell check. I fixed it.

Thanks. Yeah the symbols showed up w/ spell check. I fixed it.