Now that was something so enjoyable, and it made my heart pump so fast.

It's about being labeled.. dog tags and stuff.
And their voices are just inside ours! It's so damn annoying.

I should wear earplugs.
I should play loud music.

^ MY FAVORITE PART :)

Cheers.
We just want to shut the Fuk up. really shute'em up!

It's like being a psyche. Psychotic manifestations, and sounds looming over our head!! You made me feel that. It is so ALOUD!

And the end... I can feel that it's about a mad-man, with the manifestations he visualized.
Actually, it was so tense and dense.

High Five :)

I truly love the way you perceive dark poetry. It's sinister but personal, perhaps psychological depth. This write was no different, though I have to say that it came a bit as a surprise, for it had quite a modern spin. I think I am always used to your poetry as something rather classical. Yet there I find all objects of our own time and it's really interesting the way you still manage to carry the same tone of your other works throughout.

We always are much harder on ourselves than others are. You are a gifted poet Karla, and a wondeful person. Never forget that!

Well done for writing this, I again felt connected tot his piece and enjoyed the way you layed this out and worded it.

I could picture you being restrained in a centre or hospital against your will, and I liked how you mentiont he labels which society is so big on now. They feel they have to put a label on everything and everyone and what they suufer with.

I feel so sorry for the people who seek help and get judged and labelled instead. Then they wonder why people suffer in silence!

I gather fromt his it is about mental illness? Perhaps bipolar or schizophrenia?

Great poem, I liked again how you talk to the reader through the brackets. I like this in your writing.