In a brilliant way, they were written, the words.. which describe being on an edge of falling.

And what's more great is that you described falling as falling for freedom! It's amazing ;) Original, I think.

And the few syllables on each line just makes the reader moved and anticipate for the end. It was a very tense read, and creative.
Way to go, Sarah :)

This is different than how you usually write, but still its something amazing. Alot of us has gone through that at some point in life. Its the fear of the unknown that agonizes the most.

Great poem in its simplicity sweetie.

Couple of suggestions:

Hesitating; I hold my grip.
^^
Make the "H" small letter, looks better.

Also I suggest leaving a line before the last line, it would give more effect to the way its read.

Keep it up Pinky ;)

WOW!! I love this!!! Good work!

While reading it, I can feel every word and the ending was PERFECT!!!

I agree with girl. .. And i think this was a really deep poem the last line sumed it all up well penned

tony x

Different and excellently done. Can't say more then it's perfection on paper..Good job