One Day More

What I like most about this poem is the first stanza.

The whole poem you can see that you have strong feelings for this person, it's great!

You're jealous
it's cute and
only makes me like you
all so much more

^^^
The way I see it, in the first stanza, it shows me that not only do you have strong feelings for him, but he has strong feelings for you too.

People don't usually get jealous over someone they don't care about. That's the way I see it.

I love it when my husband gets jealous sometimes, not crazy jealous but you know that little hint that tells you that they love you more than anything in the world.

That is what I felt when reading your poem

Well done

x

U knw kristian ,,,ur poems r good at telling d very first ,,,d very true feelings of a hrt ...this shows hw pure ur heart and soul is ...love u ,,,fr this excelllent piece..

Very cute... and amzing... poem. great work...

my fav stanza

You are a wish
you are a dream
something I fore see

Still I think of you
and wish one day
we can be more

you got a talent. im jelous hehehe :) good work