Comments : Careless World

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Its such a wonderful piece you have written. such a great poem. this is the life. and these all things happens often. good work.... take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    I loved this poem,

    So man strong words and expressions.

    It steals your family
    your friends, love
    and happiness
    perhaps it steals your soul

    Icy cold
    darkness blind
    evil vines
    sucking life's
    into a void
    a black hole

    ^^^ VERY powerful stuff

    I feel as though sometimes I blame the world for so many things!

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