by Colm Nov 10, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
You think I dont know it, but amongst |
by Yrem Crish
Well-penned..i like the metaphors used in this stuff..very fascinating.. |
"Here the wishing hours linger, and the near blackness |
by Saerelune
Well done Colm, congrats on the win! |
This well written poems deserves to be on the front page |
by Saerelune
When i first read this poem (that is when only three lines were submitted) i wad truly stuck with these "greenhouse kisses", as i had no idea what it could symbolize. I wad also stuck with the eyelids for eyes and lits seemed two extremely incoherent objects, although the word "gossip" gives us a slight hint of some balance between the two. Perhaps it was because the greenhouse seemed to have very heavy symbolism, so that the non-existing connection between the two was even more noticeable. But now you've added this very impacting phrase about gaps and it is all much more connectable now. |