Comments : Don't Lose Control

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Spoken from the heart :)

    Stop by every once in a while
    to look deep into who you are,
    to make sure you still know
    who is that on your reflection.
    -Love this. Telling yourself to stop & making sure that the reflection looking back is you & not someone else.

    I love this poem. Reflecting on all your past decisions & mistakes, making sure you don't do them again. But learn & take it with you for knowledge and for the future :)

    Great job Love
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Awww. this poem is so cute. every stanza has a lesson for life. good work :)

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww this was a beautiful poem! It was worth the wait to read it :) I really love the message of this poem, I think it was relevant and any person could be affected by this.

    I LOVED the last stanza... I think it was the perfect ending, it was a lovely message and reminder to all of us... and it was a breath of fresh air to read!

    Great job sweetie!!! =D

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    It's an amazing tribute to every human mind.. Just be you, think right, and select the best roads.

    Great, Meme :)

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    So very uplifting, for the lost, the unsure and the doubting folks in life. Also, humbling for the folks who never look back when they wrong others, or themselves. A very inspirational, introspective and innovative lesson for all of us, to pause when we do not know where to tread, to make amends when we make mistakes, and to learn from whatever life has store for us.

    The 4th stanza could use some rewording, in this readerss opinion. Overall, a very mature and inspiring poem. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A great job of lessons in humanity. Your wording spoke clearly, with an easy flow bordered in wisdom.
    Excellent and enjoyable

  • 12 years ago

    by RSJ

    Spoken from the heart
    this shows how wise of a woman you can be,
    i liked the message behind this, this is good advice and sometimes you really should stop and think about what could have been and what should have been, enhance a better life style
    5/5 and this was awsome.