Thanks :)

The idea, the content of this piece is good but its not reaching its full potential..witi some punctuatios and editimg here and there, i know this piece will even b bette...i giv it a 4, bt i knnw with the necessary collections, its a straight 5.

'What repels, is not meant to be' Tame the Past, and name your Future' and you can be sure to be fine in the end.. Well done!

Its good. but try to give it stanza shape poem.. ignore the big lines... break the lines and give them the stanza shape. so it would better look a poem..... :)

Awwww i love this poem its really good you did a great job...

well done love
5/5 from me hun!!!!

Thanksss ;*